Music Video Progress #4

As the 'feminine' segment of the music video has been filmed in the studio, I have placed the footage in the music video. Below is a screenshot of the music video so far.

Re-watching the video myself, I think that there needs to be more variety within the music video. Because I am the one editing the actual footage, seeing the music video from start to finish repetitively, I think that it does not seem enticing due to the fact that there are only two different locations and outfit changes with the artist throughout the whole music video (Car Park and studio). I am going to discuss this issue with my group and we will see what we can do in order to make the music video appeal and meet the conventions more.